865 Verification.
I really had a good time with the pages when everyone was trying to guess what MMORPG Alex plays. It’s kind of telling that everyone instantly assumed it had to be a real one though. I think on some level we get trained to expect certain things because of the other media we observe. I didn’t want Alex’s game to be one that people already knew about. Finding out about it is part of the fun of her story. The title alone is enough to give part of it away, but the fun is in the journey rather than the destination anyway.
The dynamic between Jo, John, & Alex only gets more entertaining the more I write. I hope you guys enjoy it. She kind of stirs things up with all the characters as time goes by.
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” the fun is in the journey rather than the destination anyway. ” kind of like masturbating
Not so sure, without the climax it would be kinda tiring.
Followed the link over from Dumbing of Age, and had to read the whole thing :3
It’s been said before, but it’s awesome stuff (^_^)-b
Would that be the ‘choke slams for everyone’ thing?
dude i love the way you write, the way your character interact, and just the whole vibe in general. So for that i thank you so much. So keep it up because i am so hooked, was from page one.
I see a raph sitting on a desk, awesomeness
I just know noticed that Alex sort of looks like Velma from Scooby Doo.
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