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A potential motive for the alleged murder or something, a McCoy-Hatfield kind of feud between the two families? The baby, not actually belonging to the dead father but to the man who wanted the land?

Do you doubt that Alex, she who keeps her big blue eyes covered umtil she needs them for effect, is a tease? Part of her charm.

Hey Jackie,

So, I just spent the last two days rereading everything. It was a fun trip down memory lane. I originally started reading right after color, before the WillowBrooke saga (Chapter? Saga? Arc? Fuck it)
And it was a fun ride once again. I appreciated the foreshadowing that I missed on the thrice weekly upload schedule. It was nice seeing your skills improve over time, shifting from reference humor (which there wasn’t that much of, at least compared to other web comics) to proper character stories. Seeing Reggie’s character growth is great, as is seeing the deconstruction of Thomas’ persona. The ‘Secret Bunker’ arc was fun the first time around, but it absolutely flows better when you are able to read the pages back to back. Which is also true of the last time our characters were at God Be with Brew (And yes, I chose that phrasing carefully).

You’ve left seeds planted for how this story could end. And with the title as it is, I dont expect a happy ending. But I like these characters, I like seeing their day to day. I like being a part of the story you are telling, even as just an outsider looking into this world. I…feel like I may have said something similar to this in a previous comment XD

The point stands. You are a good writer. I enjoy the work that you make. I look forward to seeing more of it, and I also look forward to how you will one day end this story. Not because I want it to end; because I know you will give the ending the respect it deserves.

Thank you, Jackie, for telling this story.

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