I never made a habit of putting in extra notes about little things like timing in the past, but I started doing it every so often a while back. The one on this page kind of goes for a lot of these multi story arcs. Everyone’s stories are going on simultaneously, so Really when something happens to one group I tend to jump a little way backwards or forwards to whatever is going on with another. Generally it doesn’t matter. Even now I don’t need to really spell it out. People will just assume that the parts with each group follow the other parts and not think about it overmuch. But really if all the stuff happened and then each group just stopped while they weren’t on screen the time would extend for each scene to a wild degree. This is also part of why the first two chronological days take around 300 pages to tell. All the players are moving in time and space such that they meet up at the right times and places to do the things that make the story. Most of the time you, as an observer never really need to make note of it. The only reason I did it here is so that the sky would match the time of evening they are in rather than it being fully night like it is for the other groups already. If they were indoors it wouldn’t matter at all. Arguably it still doesn’t, I just wanted to put it in so I did.

Anyway, I got back from Thanksgiving a couple hours ago and finished this up. I hope you all survived the holiday. If you died and are sticking round on the mortal plain to check out where my story goes first, I admire your dedication, and second I will miss seeing your comments. If you are still with us in this veil of tears. and would like to support my work, please do so with the links above. In these dire economic times it is a big help to this humble comic merchant.

Have a safe weekend. I will see you back here on Monday hopefully. If not I will mourn your passing in as much as I will notice your absence. On that cheerful note, later taters.

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