In the first draft of this story this was, more or less, the last page.  The inclusion of Jo changed that.  I like each of these parts to have a feeling of closure.  Like, a capstone that says “This is the end of this part”.  I’m not sure what my success rate is, but whatever.  I try at any rate.  The new ending has a fun scene with Carol and Thomas.  I’m not really sure why I keep writing these things so they take place over the course of a day, more or less, but it seems to work alright.  I think I should release each one as a book for itself rather than just arbitrary pages.  The shorter stories will be less expensive.  Anyway, something to think about.