I like playing around with the characters’ hair, like if they just had a bath, or what have you. It makes you look at them differently. Like if someone who wears glasses takes them off. It’s strange how we grow accustomed to stuff like that. I try to mess that up from time to time.
I really liked the idea of the story shifting from Thomas telling the story to Jo to him having been telling the larger story to Carol. It felt very cinematic to me. I hope it reads that way once people see it all in a row.
I really wish I could think of something worth talking about. I really enjoyed everyone’s writings about some of the more verbose recent journals. I find you all interesting. XD